Your eyes that sees and haunts
Does it feel the fire
Burning deep within
A desire for that
accented vision
another look at the
universe
(picture used with permission ~Sendako from deviantart)
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i like this too! that poetic prose…prosaic poetry.
but in the vein of our 1-2am conversation, grammatical glitch! “eyes that see and haunt”. less sibilant, but just as poignant i think. 🙂
i’m being anal right. but it’s 3am now. haha.