What I Saw

Along the path I see
A petal drops
From a guilty rose
The threads of
Snaps and breaks
As it floats
Into the black cesspool
Juxtaposing against
The blackness
A spot of
Or is it white?
Remembrance fails
As it vanishes
Into the void
Just a fragment
Of all in


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3 thoughts on “What I Saw

  1. Loved the imagery created in this. Very striking. The opening three lines are indeed very powerful. Almost seem to be seeking an exploration of the rose’s guilt and its relationship with the petal. Perhaps you can spin another one using those first three lines?

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