One look at “She Sings” and one can’t help but feel that that I have not built enough on the emotions of the protagonist and let my readers have a deeper insight into his feelings. Another flaw would perhaps be the abrupt ending to this poem.

Forgive me, but I am rusty of late and devoid of time. Mayhap I would improve on it, most probably when I am given the time, but this week has been a rather hectic one, driving one to hell. Or am I already in it?

One wonders.


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