Comments for guerrilla.moon || a metaphor http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com will the music of my words reach the man in the moon? Sat, 14 Nov 2009 05:12:10 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Oblivious reminiscence by Tim http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/2009/11/04/oblivious-reminiscence/#comment-1257 Tim Sat, 14 Nov 2009 05:12:10 +0000 http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/?p=770#comment-1257 he teases her, she laughs he tickles her, she squeals he holds her face in his hands she looks lovingly into his eyes young people, i thought all of 70 years old observed on a flight from Paris to $ingapore on an autumn day in 2004 he teases her, she laughs
he tickles her, she squeals
he holds her face in his hands
she looks lovingly into his eyes
young people, i thought
all of 70 years old

observed on a flight from Paris to $ingapore on an autumn day in 2004

]]> Comment on First-timers? by 射手座の新★ http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/2009/10/29/first-timers/#comment-1255 射手座の新★ Thu, 29 Oct 2009 04:03:10 +0000 http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/?p=755#comment-1255 Lol your head :D Lol your head :D

]]> Comment on First-timers? by Laremy http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/2009/10/29/first-timers/#comment-1254 Laremy Wed, 28 Oct 2009 23:21:33 +0000 http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/?p=755#comment-1254 LOL. LOL.

]]> Comment on whence guerrilla moon? by 射手座の新★ http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/about-the-author/#comment-1253 射手座の新★ Wed, 28 Oct 2009 19:55:55 +0000 http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/about-the-author/#comment-1253 Let me sit on this for a bit. And meanwhile, here's a link on dystopian fiction. The definition is not definitive :) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dystopia Some examples of such novels are George Orwell,s 1984, Aldous Huxley's Brave New World. Blade Runner the film is also considered dystopian. And so is Philip K Dick's Dr Bloodmoney. Let me sit on this for a bit. And meanwhile, here’s a link on dystopian fiction. The definition is not definitive :)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dystopia

Some examples of such novels are George Orwell,s 1984, Aldous Huxley’s Brave New World. Blade Runner the film is also considered dystopian. And so is Philip K Dick’s Dr Bloodmoney.

]]> Comment on hello world by First-timers? « guerrilla.moon || a metaphor http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/about-me/#comment-1252 First-timers? « guerrilla.moon || a metaphor Wed, 28 Oct 2009 19:50:05 +0000 http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/?page_id=537#comment-1252 [...] hello world [...] [...] hello world [...]

]]> Comment on whence guerrilla moon? by Sheralyn http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/about-the-author/#comment-1251 Sheralyn Sat, 24 Oct 2009 16:52:33 +0000 http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/about-the-author/#comment-1251 I am a big time sci-fi fan. Especially the king and creator of that genre H.G. Wells. I don't know what dystopian fiction is. Please explain. Well, I took your advise and incorporated the "doll theme" even further. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my efforts to express myself. Sometimes "forward" is my middle name!" If you have the inclination to give me further feedback, please do so. And yes, I have read SK's early writings. His imagination certainly intrigues me. Sheralyn In the Pink First Barbie and Midge. Then, Barbie and Midge and Ken A Nova Scotian menage a tois In the Annapolis Valley of the Dolls A duo plus one Love times three Love minus one Minus two One and one and one The numbers, an integration of prime and odd The chemistry and friendship, incredible A triangle as old as recorded history Pink corsets, pink cheeks and pink pussies And a pulsating pink prick A pedestal for Barbie, the wife The pink of shame for Midge, the mistress All for one and a free-for-all The muskateers of triumphant feelings, trampled Three decades go by and A second triumpharate forms First, Ken and Skipper. Then, Midge and Ken and Skipper Again, Ken gets to have his dolls and eat them too A plastic and flesh banquet Pink brightens into the red of embarrassment as Again Midge becomes the other woman The colours are hot and so is this made by Mattel situation And yet the reflective regret Does not regress into remorse Because playing house Remains a childish fantasy Even if all the dolls are animated Shame on Midge Shame on Ken What a shame They have no shame Shameless Is becoming fragment again, inevitable? Would Skipper put on a pink corset And let her pink nipples be Licked by the pink tongue of the other woman As her husband jerked off? Pink and red and black Perhaps Pepper is the ultimate remedy Of bringing everyone to life. I am a big time sci-fi fan. Especially the king and creator of that genre H.G. Wells. I don’t know what dystopian fiction is. Please explain. Well, I took your advise and incorporated the “doll theme” even further. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my efforts to express myself. Sometimes “forward” is my middle name!” If you have the inclination to give me further feedback, please do so.

And yes, I have read SK’s early writings. His imagination certainly intrigues me.

Sheralyn

In the Pink

First Barbie and Midge. Then, Barbie and Midge and Ken
A Nova Scotian menage a tois
In the Annapolis Valley of the Dolls

A duo plus one
Love times three
Love minus one
Minus two
One and one and one

The numbers, an integration of prime and odd
The chemistry and friendship, incredible
A triangle as old as recorded history

Pink corsets, pink cheeks and pink pussies
And a pulsating pink prick

A pedestal for Barbie, the wife
The pink of shame for Midge, the mistress

All for one and a free-for-all
The muskateers of triumphant feelings, trampled

Three decades go by and
A second triumpharate forms

First, Ken and Skipper. Then, Midge and Ken and Skipper
Again, Ken gets to have his dolls and eat them too
A plastic and flesh banquet

Pink brightens into the red of embarrassment as
Again Midge becomes the other woman
The colours are hot and so is this made by Mattel situation

And yet the reflective regret
Does not regress into remorse
Because playing house
Remains a childish fantasy

Even if all the dolls are animated

Shame on Midge
Shame on Ken
What a shame
They have no shame
Shameless

Is becoming fragment again, inevitable?
Would Skipper put on a pink corset
And let her pink nipples be
Licked by the pink tongue of the other woman
As her husband jerked off?

Pink and red and black

Perhaps Pepper is the ultimate remedy
Of bringing everyone to life.

]]> Comment on whence guerrilla moon? by 射手座の新★ http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/about-the-author/#comment-1250 射手座の新★ Sat, 24 Oct 2009 13:33:40 +0000 http://guerrillapoet.wordpress.com/about-the-author/#comment-1250 I've like Stephen King's early hack writings, not really sure about his fiction though. Do you have copies of his early journalistic endeavours? I'm not really a classical reader but sci-fi and dystopian fiction I like. Hmm forward yes it is haha. The dolls Barbie and Ken kept appearing in my mind whenever I came across those names. Since you're going with the Made in Mattel situation, perhaps you would like to take the metaphor further? I’ve like Stephen King’s early hack writings, not really sure about his fiction though. Do you have copies of his early journalistic endeavours? I’m not really a classical reader but sci-fi and dystopian fiction I like.

Hmm forward yes it is haha. The dolls Barbie and Ken kept appearing in my mind whenever I came across those names. Since you’re going with the Made in Mattel situation, perhaps you would like to take the metaphor further?

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